The sound of sparrows chirping as they fly through the periwinkle sky
the gentle autumn breeze blows and rustles the leaves.
The sun glints against the cerulean lake.
the golden sun illuminates his gorgeous face.
I'm walking with my love, Brett.
we talk and contemplate the crazy year we've been through.

All in a instant the clear sky was encompassed in gray storm clouds.
The peace and tranquility had been disturbed
the birds flew out of trees in a rush to escape
the deafening silence in the air took my breathe away..

Brett and I turn to face eachother.
He quicky grasps my hand and pulls me into a bear hug 
as we embrace I feel warm. like nothing can harm us.
Invincible.

But the tranquility didnt last.
for all of a sudden a man grabbed my arms. tearing me from Brett.
He was dressed in all black and had intense brown eyes
He threw my frail body against a tree.
and tied my arms around the course tree trung with ropes.


The man traps me a maniacal stare
he whirelled to brett. tieing his feet together with rope.
the tears burn against my face as the anger and hopelessness wells up inside me.
The rope sends a fiery burning up my arm as I struggle to get free.
the assaulter grabbed Brett's arms and tied them up also.
throwing Brett against the ground; our assaulter walked up to me.

Taunting me in his gruff voice he starts to laugh like a lunatic
"You'll never see your love again. and you're gonna sit there crying like a pathetic puppy. you cant help him. you cant save him. Deal. With. It."
he continues laughing. Using all my might I struggle against my ropes.

The man turns and walks over to Brett.
he grabs Brett's arms and drags him over to the lake.
the deep cobalt water maliciously glints and dances as the light twinkles on the surface.
The man grabs Brett and casts him into the lake.

I scream in agony as I see my love.
helplessly I watch as his head is immersed in the water.
I continue to cry and yell out in pain while the man laughs maniaclly and runs off into the velvety night.
the torrent of emotions build up. more tears sting my face as the run down. My love is dead. or dying. and I cant help.
as I cry and scream in anguish and torment. everything I had is gone.

Finally I shudder and darkness envelopes me.
My Screams are silenced.
My Tears stop falling.
as I eclipse into the dark.

once my eyes flutter open I'm safe in my bedroom.
my curtains billowing in the spring wind.
it was all just a bad dream.
a crazy nightmare.
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Hope you guys enjoyed my crazy poem. Please leave comments on how good/bad/or boring you thought it was(:
Love Amanda


elvia
7/17/2011 01:51:19 pm

haha brett

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Shailene
7/17/2011 01:56:49 pm

YES, you dork ;)

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'via
7/17/2011 01:59:19 pm

good poem by the way .

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Shailene
7/18/2011 01:59:11 pm

Thanks 'Via!! ;)

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A reader.
7/25/2011 02:39:08 am

Oh my goodness! this poem is brilliant! I've been reading all of your poems and postings. and I must say you seem like a really bright teenager. I find this poem very intense but very nicely written. and very good usage of adjectives. I hope to see more like this!

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Amanda
7/27/2011 06:21:21 am

thank you! (:

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A fan. (:
9/11/2011 02:49:50 am

I love this. please keep writing!

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I<3Bears
9/11/2011 02:50:24 am

OMGEEE. This is so intense. I love it. and im a boy! :O please write more.

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